This is my "Before" pictures for expressive figure drawing. It is also my first project of this type.
*The weight of her breasts
* The curve of her hips
*The placement of her right arm (implied)
*The proportion of her waist/hip/pubic area - it feels like everything is more or less in the right place, anatomy-wise
*The slope of her shoulders
It's important to look at your work, no matter how rough and novice, and see the likable bits.
And I look forward to the day when I can pull this out, compare it to that days work and say, "Wow! Look how far I've come!"
But where is the fun in that?